I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Last week we worked on a narrative on Te tiriti o Waitangi then the next week i finished it. We also did a podcast about it. Have you done a podcast before???
Ka mau te wehi, awesome work Limihai! I like how you spoke expressively in your podcast, and how you had a buddy make sound effects in the background. Your narrative had lots of twists and turns - I was relieved that Mr Beast showed Chandler mercy in the end! Hopefully Chandler had learned his lesson. What was the experience of recording your podcast like for you?
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Ka mau te wehi, awesome work Limihai! I like how you spoke expressively in your podcast, and how you had a buddy make sound effects in the background. Your narrative had lots of twists and turns - I was relieved that Mr Beast showed Chandler mercy in the end! Hopefully Chandler had learned his lesson. What was the experience of recording your podcast like for you?
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