I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Limihai your cat is very cute and very entartaining. I can stop looking at your cat.I have one question does it have talents because if it has talents I would be impressed. Your cat always eat's food that is funny I hope you don't give him human foods. Enjoy reading this comment :)
Hi Limihai,My name is Sione from EHS. Your brothers cat looks so cool, I hope I meet your cat Harry. Ka kite. Have a good weekend but what have you been doing with your cat?
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Kia Ora Limihai,
ReplyDeleteHarry is a very cute cat! How old is he?
Do you help look after him too?
Hope your family is healthy and safe at home.
Felicia
Hi Limihai your cat is very cute and very entartaining. I can stop looking at your cat.I have one question does it have talents because if it has talents I would be impressed. Your cat always eat's food that is funny I hope you don't give him human foods. Enjoy reading this comment :)
ReplyDeleteHi Limihai,My name is Sione from EHS. Your brothers cat looks so cool, I hope I meet your cat Harry. Ka kite. Have a good weekend but what have you been doing with your cat?
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