I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Limihai, this is Cam. Thanks for posting your learning on your blog. I think it was a good idea to change the colour of some of the writing, what do the different colours mean? Next time you post about your learning, it would be a good idea to write a few sentences to say what you were learning about.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Limihai, this is Cam. Thanks for posting your learning on your blog. I think it was a good idea to change the colour of some of the writing, what do the different colours mean? Next time you post about your learning, it would be a good idea to write a few sentences to say what you were learning about.
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ReplyDeleteHello Limihai you did AMAZING WORK AND AWESOME WORK you should do more thumbs up and thumbs down.
ReplyDeleteHello Limihai you did good work but maybe you could finish all of them.
ReplyDeleteHi Limihai you one is cool im honest its really cool
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