I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Mīharo, amazing work on your anime-style comic Limihai! I love how you ended it "to be continued", it's just like a real comic and has me in suspense. You might have to turn this into a series! What's going to happen next??
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Mīharo, amazing work on your anime-style comic Limihai! I love how you ended it "to be continued", it's just like a real comic and has me in suspense. You might have to turn this into a series! What's going to happen next??
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