I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai, good work sharing your three poems Limihai. Your ice-cream haiku made me laugh! You have followed the structure for each type of poem correctly. Well done.
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Ka pai, good work sharing your three poems Limihai. Your ice-cream haiku made me laugh! You have followed the structure for each type of poem correctly. Well done.
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