I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora kōrua, thank you for sharing your book review. The way you both speak so clearly and expressively is fantastic. One thing that is missing is your opinion of the book. What did you think of it? I like how you gave a summary of the book.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora kōrua, thank you for sharing your book review. The way you both speak so clearly and expressively is fantastic. One thing that is missing is your opinion of the book. What did you think of it? I like how you gave a summary of the book.
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