I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello today i did a prompt i had to write about the weather and it was raining today but i didn't do all this in real life obviously. can you write a prompt?
Kia ora Limihai, I love the way you have used your imagination to create a piece of writing that could have happened in real life. You were thinking about what you would like to do if you could - great use of your imagination. Great use of full stops and commas in your writing, all your punctuation is correct. What lollies would you have chosen? Keep up the great writing.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Limihai, I love the way you have used your imagination to create a piece of writing that could have happened in real life. You were thinking about what you would like to do if you could - great use of your imagination. Great use of full stops and commas in your writing, all your punctuation is correct. What lollies would you have chosen? Keep up the great writing.
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